tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post7657024880503109388..comments2024-03-28T10:05:40.822+01:00Comments on The Yaqqothl Grimoire: My First One Page DungeonIl Male™http://www.blogger.com/profile/02699384706214815033noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-5509359693080599932018-10-16T09:15:46.305+02:002018-10-16T09:15:46.305+02:00Great article! All the articles you have, they enj...Great article! All the articles you have, they enjoy reading and learning a lot. Your article is very helpful for me. I hope you will continue to write such good articles as well.<br /><a title="seo services in pakistan" href="http://www.baisnaqvi.com" rel="nofollow">seo services in pakistan</a><br /><a title="seo company in dubai" href="https://baisnaqvi.com/seo-dubai/" rel="nofollow">seo company in dubai</a><br /><a title="digital marketing in pakistan" href="https://baisnaqvi.com/seo/digital-marketing-seo-services-in-pakistan/" rel="nofollow">digital marketing in pakistan</a><br /><a title="pakistani chat room" href="https://www.tafreehchat.com/" rel="nofollow">pakistani chat room</a><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16819192318511377936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-1834418035915074962012-07-09T22:06:38.886+02:002012-07-09T22:06:38.886+02:00Fixed, thank you! Perhaps I should load the darts ...Fixed, thank you! Perhaps I should load the darts with narcoleptic - imagine the terror in the eyes of the players when they wake up ON the butcher's table...Il Male™https://www.blogger.com/profile/02699384706214815033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-12641878957296341102012-07-09T22:02:16.327+02:002012-07-09T22:02:16.327+02:00Since you asked, grammar:
"If pick-locked br...Since you asked, grammar:<br /><br />"If pick-locked broke down the door activates a dart from the walls trap when opened."<br /><br />Perhaps rewrite as (if I am understanding your intent correctly) =><br /><br />"If the door is broken down, or the lock is picked, a dart trap from the wall activates when the door is opened."<br /><br />(Also, is the dart poisoned?)Necropraxishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12716340801054739658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-12229820607817678252012-07-09T04:29:07.457+02:002012-07-09T04:29:07.457+02:00Thanks Brendan! I guess I may move the little stor...Thanks Brendan! I guess I may move the little story box under/over the room key, and report the wandering monsters table with some adjustments. I'll see how that works out in section 1C and possibly modify the previous entries :)Il Male™https://www.blogger.com/profile/02699384706214815033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-64168501597854571742012-07-09T03:27:45.637+02:002012-07-09T03:27:45.637+02:00Looks great. I might prefer something like a wande...Looks great. I might prefer something like a wandering monster table to a notes area, given the extra space. Love the details like the monster porn and the chance or rescuing an evil character from the spiders.Necropraxishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12716340801054739658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-23830089345193240502012-07-07T17:19:25.921+02:002012-07-07T17:19:25.921+02:00Yeah sorry I was just updating the document. His a...Yeah sorry I was just updating the document. His actual (and final) name is The Butcher :)Il Male™https://www.blogger.com/profile/02699384706214815033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-90887554382314098312012-07-07T17:12:27.577+02:002012-07-07T17:12:27.577+02:00So is the bad guy "the Butcher" or "...So is the bad guy "the Butcher" or "The Torturer"? You seem to be split on his name.Daniel "Theophage" Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06549820632347676051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-35593726234925178432012-07-06T21:34:00.216+02:002012-07-06T21:34:00.216+02:00I was thinking of "reverse wish", or som...I was thinking of "reverse wish", or something like that. Thanks for your kind words :)Il Male™https://www.blogger.com/profile/02699384706214815033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-28420668676565115752012-07-06T21:31:28.368+02:002012-07-06T21:31:28.368+02:00so what happens if you "wish too loudly?"...so what happens if you "wish too loudly?"<br />Pretty cool, I'm definintely going to add it to my collection. Thanks for posting!DaveLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01837748113498012191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-60118323715228356522012-07-06T10:43:56.456+02:002012-07-06T10:43:56.456+02:00Nice map too :)Nice map too :)Simon Forsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01243845335993440168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-46388309477994022452012-07-06T07:35:49.405+02:002012-07-06T07:35:49.405+02:00Ups, you're damn right sir!Ups, you're damn right sir!Il Male™https://www.blogger.com/profile/02699384706214815033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8514926277061122548.post-89033376754442808752012-07-06T02:30:11.499+02:002012-07-06T02:30:11.499+02:00I haven't read it yet but it looks great Ni, a...I haven't read it yet but it looks great Ni, although you should put your name on it somewhere.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com